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In this essay, I will explore the causes of this serious problem and offer a number of solutions that can help to alleviate it.

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Some parents insist that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time. Children of such parents, therefore, would be deprived of reading books that many of their friends discuss, such as The Three Musketeers, Robinson Crusoe, The Lord of the Rings, or Harry Potter.

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Professor John Smith from the psychology department at the University of Oxford is convinced that reading fiction increases people’s empathy and compassion.

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Schoolchildren dislike mathematics from an early age.
Employers prefer hands-on work experience over a university degree.

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Please read this IELTS Writing Task 2 introduction. What mistake was made here?

Crime is an indispensable part of society. As long as there are rules, there are also people who will break them. Today, the main way of punishing people for their misdeeds is sending them to prison. Prisons exist in every country on Earth and most of them are notoriously overcrowded. How can people be deterred from committing crimes? Some consider stricter sentences to be the preferred way to prevent crimes, while others disagree. In this essay I will discuss both views and explain why I think that criminals are often victims of circumstances and helping them find their way in life would be more effective than threatening them with years behind bars. (112 words)

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