Very well said! I'd just remove 'however' from the last sentence

Well written! At the beginning, I'd just say, "It's true that people should learn about their own country, but it is equally true..."

Well argued! Perhaps we could remove the words "aggressive behaviours" and simple say, "It can lead to anger, anxiety, and depression."

A general note: I've noticed that some of you used quite complex ideas, words and very long sentences. As a result, those sentences were not grammatically correct and ideas were not very clear. Try to simplify further. If a sentence looks long, see if you can split it into two ;)

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