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Muvaffaqiyat Siri

Bir kuni bir yigit donishmand Sokratdan muvaffaqiyat sirini so'radi. Suqrot odamning savolini sabr bilan tingladi va javob olish uchun ertasi kuni ertalab daryo bo'yida uchrashishini aytdi. Ertasi kuni ertalab Sokrat yigitdan u bilan daryo tomon yurishni iltimos qildi. Ular daryoga borishganda, suv ularning bo'yniga ko'tarildi. Ammo yigit ajablanib, Sokrat uni suvga tushirdi.

Yigit suvdan chiqish uchun kurashdi, lekin Sokrat kuchli edi va bola ko'karib ketguncha uni o'sha erda ushlab turdi. Suqrot odamning boshini suvdan chiqarib oldi. Yigit hansirab, havodan chuqur nafas oldi. Suqrot: «Boshing suvda bo'lganida nimani ko'proq xohlarding?» deb so'radi. Yigit: “Havo”, deb javob berdi. Suqrot: “Muvaffaqiyatning siri mana shu. Agar san suvda bo'lganingda havoni xohlaganingdek muvaffaqiyatni xohlasang, unga erishasan. Boshqa hech qanday sir yo'q”.

Hikoya hulosasi:

Yonayotgan istak barcha yutuqlarning boshlang'ich nuqtasidir. Kichkina olov ko'p issiqlikni bera olmagani kabi, zaif istak ham ajoyib natijalarga olib kelmaydi.

Hammaga salom

IELTS listening dan Dars

Ayniqsa endi boshlagan yoki intermediate daraja da bolgan larga foydali boladi degan umiddaman.

✨IELTS essay yozishni boshlaganlar uchun
Advantage and Disadvantage essay

1️⃣ Introduction structure

Introduction yozayotganda eng muhimi bu topic'dan chiqip ketmaslik va berilgan sozlarni to’g’ri paraphrase qilish

1st sentence⤵️

• Nowadays,watching TV is becoming increasing popular.

1. Birinchi gapimiz umumiy gap bo'ladi nima mavzu bo'lsa shu to'g'risida gapirib o'tamiz

Internet, video games, reading books, both parents working, learning a foreign language and so on.

2nd sentence ⤵️
• Especially, young children find it really interesting to watch it or spend some amount of time in front of it.

➡️ 2 gapimiz endi generaldan specific ga o'tadi.

• For many, especially …… find it attractive/interesting/adj to ….

3rd sentence Har qanday savolga 3 chi gapni shunday deb qo'ysa boladi ⤵️

• However, watching TV for children can be/have both negative and positive experience/sides.

4th sentence⤵️
• In this essay, I will discuss why watching TV for children is positive while providing negative sides as well.
• In this essay, I will provide some reasons why this trend has both benefits and drawbacks
•
Full version ⤵️

‼️Nowadays, watching TV is becoming increasing popular. For many, especially children find it really interesting to spend hours in front of it. However, there are both positive and negative sides of doing so. In this essay, I will discuss why watching TV for youngster can be positive experience as well as what the possible negative outcomes.

👨🏻‍🏫Keling endi essay yozib ko'ramiz

Main bodyni quyidagi strukturaga qo'yib chiqamiz⤵️

📌Let’s start by looking at the advantages of ….

One of the benefits of ….. Is that …..

What I mean by this is that …..

To illustrate the point ………

in addition……..

BODY I (taxminan 5 yoki 6 ta gap)

⭕️ Let’s start by looking at the positive side or one of the positive sides of this topic/ trend/ activity. ➡️ (general sentence)

One great benefit is for children to learn a foreign language from an early childhood. ➡️(advantage'ga bitta reason/idea beramiz)

What I mean is that while children watch cartoons from other countries they are likely to pick up some English or Russian words and phrases ➡️ (bu gapimiz explaination, bergan ideani ochib tushuntirib berishimiz kk)

To illustrate the point, many youngster know the song about the Twinkle little star as they watch and hear it from the cartoons.➡️(bu esa ideani ochib berganimizdan keyingi example (xohishiy😉)

Secondly, watching various useful programs which develop their cognitive thinking or logic can be another benefit for young children. ➡️ (Ikkinchi ideani beramiz)

For instance, these types of programs can teach children the basic math skills or introduce them the names of animals and their function with simple words or pictures. Children can also learn basic physical exercise in a fun way with background music of the show for an example.
➡️(explanation with example)

In addition, they can practice a good pronunciation with native speakers from the movie or the animation.➡️(supportive idea (yordamchi idea))

‼️Endi shu strukturani disadvantage bilan ko'rib chiqamiz.

‼️davomi...


BODY II

1️⃣Turning to the other side of the argument, damaged eye vision can be a major drawback.➡️(disadvantage'ga bitta reason/idea beramiz)

2️⃣Spending too much time in front of TV can influence their eyes very badly. 3️⃣This often leads to wearing glasses and taking different medicine in the long term
➡️(bu gapimiz explaination, berilgan ideani ochib tushuntirib berishimiz kk)


4️⃣Another issue is that watching too much TV can discourage children from doing their homework in time or with proper attention. ➡️ (ikkinchi idea)

5️⃣In other words, children’s academic performance is likely to decrease unless they are under proper parent control of their time and energy.➡️(explanation)

6️⃣ Furthermore, sitting too much in front of the screen can cause problems related to their health, obesity is one possible outcome.(supportive idea)

***Bold'da berilgan so'zlar likning words

‼️Bu football player ni taniydiganlar bormi?⤵️

Har qanday qiyinchilikni yengish mumkin, agar siz...

🏆🇩🇪2014-yilda Germaniya Futbol bo'yicha Jahon chempioni bo'ladi

⚽️Chempionatda Andre Shurle o'z termajamoa hisobiga 3 ta gol yozdirib, final o'yinda hal qiluvchi golga assistentlik qiladi.

Oradan 9️⃣ yil o'tib 2️⃣9️⃣ yoshli futbolchi karyerasini to'xtatadi. Keyingi yillarda esa u hayotiga yangilik va challangelar kiritishni boshladi, bulardan bittasi bu Wim Hof Metodi (bu metod sizga sovuq havoda turli xil mashqlar bajarish, tanani kuchaytirishni o'rgatadi).

🧗🏻Va bir kuni Andre hech qanday qalin kiyimlarsiz Snizka tog'lariga chiqadi (ma'lumot uchun bu tog' Chexiyadagi eng baland to'g hisoblanadi, dengiz sathidan taxminan 1️⃣6️⃣3️⃣0️⃣ metr yuqori)

"Toqqa chiqarkanman tanamni sezmayapman, his qilmayapman; maqsadim eng yuqori cho'qqiga chiqish, o'sha paytda yo'lni davom ettirish uchun shunday bir sabab kerakki u meni harakatga undasin, to'xtashimga yo'l qo'ymasin.

Tog'dagi holatimni hech qachonn unutmasam kerak; - 19 daraja sovuq, kamida 100 Km/soat tezlikdagi sovuq shamol yuzimga tinimsiz shapatilagandek uradi, to'xtovsiz qalin qor va yomg'irlarni aytmasam ham bo'ladi.

Bundan nima o'rgandim???

Tanam men o'ylagandan ko'ra bir necha barobar kuchliligini bildim, Agar men aqlim va ruhim bilan biror maqsadga erishishni xohlasam, yo'l qanchalik o'gir va uzoq bo'lmasin unga aniq yetaman."

Assalomu alaykum azizlar

👨🏻‍💻✍️Writing task 1/2dan qiynalib yozolmayotganlar uchun quyidagi kitobni tavsiya qilgan bo'lardim⤵️

📚✍️Useful resources for writing tasks:

ieltsmaterial.com/writing - practical advices and essay samples

learn.fastrackielts.com - Step-by-Step IELTS Writing Tutorial

🎧IELTS LISTENING

1️⃣"Focus on making good decision, not perfect ones. "Good enough" streers you towards real change. Perfectionism causes decision-making paralysis, whereas improving your mood demands that you make decisions and take action"

📚"Why has nobody told me this before?" by DR JULIE SMITH

Yaqinda aynan shu kitobni sotib olgandim, afsuslanmayman.

🗒Kitobdagi o'zimga yoqqan eng yaxshi bir nechta iqtiboslarni kanalga yozib boraman xudo xohlasa.


Ha aytgancha, iqtibos tarjimasi:

Yaxshi qaror qabul qilishga e'tibor qarating, mukammallarga emas. Chunki, 'Yetarlicha yaxshi' qaror sizni o'zgarish, yaxshilanishga olib boradi.
Shuni unutmang, "Mukammallik" qaror qabul qilish bilan bog'liq muammolarga sabab bo‘ladi, hayotni o'zgartirish esa qaror va undan keyingi harakat qilishni talab qiladi.

ya'ni:

✍🏻Qaror qabul qilayotganingizda qarorlaringiz mukammal bo'lishi yoki bu qaror sizni do'stingiz yoki atrofdagilarnikidan zo'rroq bo'lishi emas, balki yaxshi bo'lishi kerak(sizga mos bo'lsin), keyinchalik bu qarorlar qanchalik holatingizga mos bo'lsa, shunchalik hayotingizni o'zgartiradi.

Chunki mukammallik doim qiyinchlik tug'diradi, harakatdan to'xtashga olib keladi.

Unutmang qaror berilgandan keyingi qilinadigan harakat va rejalar hayotingizni o'zgartiruvchi eng muhim omillardan biri.


📩Biz bilan birga qoling, ilm ulashishni davom etamiz

#Iqtibos

Link: https://t.me/MrAbbos_intensive

🤩O'qishga qiziqqanlar uchun jo'natib qo'ydima

O'qisizmi?

Once you understand the problem, use it to help you work out where you want to go and focus on the horizon ahead of
you.

😊Assalomu alaikum everyone, charchamayapsizlarmi?

Bugun sizlar bilan yana bir iqtibosni ko'rib chiqmoqchiman.

🔴Tarjimasi:

O'zingizdagi birorta muammoni tushunib yetdingiz, (misol uchun bu muammo sizda nima uchun bor, qanaqib paydo bo'ldi, nima sababdan shakllandi— shularni anglab yetdingiz) shu zahoti undan o'z maqsadingiz yo'lida foydalanishga harakat qiling. Oldingizdagi maqsadlarga boqing, ularga e'tibor qarating(muammoga emas).

Bu bilan yozuvchi nima demoqchi?

siz biror maqsadga erishmoqchi bo'larkansiz bu yo'lda muammolar bilan qarshilashasiz, chunki bu muammolar sizdagi kamchiliklarni to'ldirish uchun keladi.

Misol uchun siz IELTS speakingda 7️⃣ olmoqchisiz lekin speakingda gapirolmayapsiz.

Mummo: gapirolmaslik;

Muammo sababi: lack of vocabulary.(so'z kamligi)

Tub ildizi: so'z yodlash uchun vaqt ajratmagansiz, yoki e'tibor qaratmagansiz.

Oldingizda 2️⃣ ta yo'l bor:

1️⃣— vocabulary kam, gapirolmayman deb depressiyaga tushish, speakingdan uyalish;❌

2️⃣ — vocabular ustida ishlab uzog'i ikki uch haftada speakingni yaxshilab olish.✅

Bu yerdagi problema pozitsiyasi sizdagi weaknes'ni (kuchsizlik)'ni ko'rsatish;

🌚Endi shu problem (gapirolmaslik)ni to'g'ri qabul qilib, problemlarga emas balki maqsadlarimizga attention qilib o'z ustimizda ishlasak IELTS examda Speakingni choyini ichiramiz.

✨Problemlarga emas balki maqsadlarga e'tibor qarating

📚"Why has nobody told me this before?" by DR JULIE SMITH

#Iqtibos