Here is a task 2 topic on health, write an essay to it and develop your writing skill, following up comparing it with a model answer which we'll post tomorrow
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
#IELTS_writing
@unityeducationalcenter
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
#IELTS_writing
@unityeducationalcenter
UNITY LANGUAGE ACADEMY
Here is a task 2 topic on health, write an essay to it and develop your writing skill, following up comparing it with a model answer which we'll post tomorrow 👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇 In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of…
Here is a high banding sample answer for this topic. Compare it with your essay and develop your writing skill
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In some nations, people are getting heavier and standards of health and well-being are falling. This essay will suggest that the principal cause of these issues is the type of nourishment they are eating and submit a government education program as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main cause of the health crisis currently affecting so many individuals is over-consumption of poor quality sustenance. Convenience food and junk food, such as microwave dinners, chocolate bars, McDonald’s and pizza, have become a ubiquitous part of modern life. Eating too much of these high-fat meals causes many to gain weight and this has knock-on effects on someone’s general wellness. For example, the movie ‘Super Size Me’ demonstrated that a person who eats this kind of food all the time will not only get fat but also suffer from such things as raised blood pressure and even fatty liver disease.
The most practical solution to this problem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of a poor diet and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public. This raised awareness of the problem would lead many people starting a healthier regime. For example, the U.K. recently lobbied their citizens to eat 5 pieces of fruit and vegetables a day and this resulted in a dramatic decrease in obesity-related illnesses such as stroke and heart disease.
In summary, the current health crisis has been caused by an over-reliance on unhealthy food and states should curtail this by educating men and women on how to make healthier choices.
#IELTS_writing
@unityeducationalcenter
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In some nations, people are getting heavier and standards of health and well-being are falling. This essay will suggest that the principal cause of these issues is the type of nourishment they are eating and submit a government education program as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The main cause of the health crisis currently affecting so many individuals is over-consumption of poor quality sustenance. Convenience food and junk food, such as microwave dinners, chocolate bars, McDonald’s and pizza, have become a ubiquitous part of modern life. Eating too much of these high-fat meals causes many to gain weight and this has knock-on effects on someone’s general wellness. For example, the movie ‘Super Size Me’ demonstrated that a person who eats this kind of food all the time will not only get fat but also suffer from such things as raised blood pressure and even fatty liver disease.
The most practical solution to this problem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of a poor diet and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public. This raised awareness of the problem would lead many people starting a healthier regime. For example, the U.K. recently lobbied their citizens to eat 5 pieces of fruit and vegetables a day and this resulted in a dramatic decrease in obesity-related illnesses such as stroke and heart disease.
In summary, the current health crisis has been caused by an over-reliance on unhealthy food and states should curtail this by educating men and women on how to make healthier choices.
#IELTS_writing
@unityeducationalcenter
Forwarded from UNITY LANGUAGE ACADEMY
🎊🎊🎊 Unity Language Academy announces fantastic and long waited news🎉🎉🎉
What: New Year Party at UNITY
When: on the 27'th of December from 12:00 till 17:00
Where: "Vodiy" wedding ceremony's hall (landmark: foreign languages faculty of FerSU)
Price: 50.000 sums
Why you shouldn't miss it:
1) friendly and lovely atmosphere
2) lovely music
3) memorable ceremony
4) dance and disco
5) Chance to get together with all your best friends and teachers
6) a chance to gather with old friends and recall memories
7) fantastic mood
8) unforgetable memory
9) memorable shows and games
10) and so many more that make it irresistable
Either a current or ex student is welcome to participate in it.
Those who want to participate, we kindly ask to approach Mr.Bobur or Mr.Oliver at the reception with the money and register as soon as possible, as we have limited seats. Do not miss your chance!!!
EAGERLY LOOKING FORWARD TO SEE ALL OF YOU AT THIS INCREDIBLE PARTY✨⭐️🌟💥💥🔥🔥🔥🔥⚡️✨🌟⭐️
@unityeducationalcenter
What: New Year Party at UNITY
When: on the 27'th of December from 12:00 till 17:00
Where: "Vodiy" wedding ceremony's hall (landmark: foreign languages faculty of FerSU)
Price: 50.000 sums
Why you shouldn't miss it:
1) friendly and lovely atmosphere
2) lovely music
3) memorable ceremony
4) dance and disco
5) Chance to get together with all your best friends and teachers
6) a chance to gather with old friends and recall memories
7) fantastic mood
8) unforgetable memory
9) memorable shows and games
10) and so many more that make it irresistable
Either a current or ex student is welcome to participate in it.
Those who want to participate, we kindly ask to approach Mr.Bobur or Mr.Oliver at the reception with the money and register as soon as possible, as we have limited seats. Do not miss your chance!!!
EAGERLY LOOKING FORWARD TO SEE ALL OF YOU AT THIS INCREDIBLE PARTY✨⭐️🌟💥💥🔥🔥🔥🔥⚡️✨🌟⭐️
@unityeducationalcenter
Forwarded from U.S. Embassy Tashkent
The U.S. Embassy is pleased to announce the 2020 Study of the U.S. Institutes (SUSI) for Student Leaders on Women’s Leadership program. Sponsored by the U.S. Department of State, the program is scheduled for June – August, 2020 at Green River Community College in Auburn, Washington. To learn more about the program and application procedure, please follow this link: https://uz.usembassy.gov/education-culture/exchange-programs/susi/
Spread the word among your women friends!
#SUSI #studentleaders #women #leadership
Spread the word among your women friends!
#SUSI #studentleaders #women #leadership